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Nina Carroll's avatar

Lovely lovely images in a recipe form. Perhaps this is a hermit crab poem?

Tender mindful intriguing

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Suchita Senthil Kumar's avatar

Oh yes! I wasn't too aware of hermit crab poems despite having heard of the name before. This is definitely one of them : ) thank you again

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afifa's avatar

this is so beautifully written I love it so much, the last line gosh!!

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Suchita Senthil Kumar's avatar

Thank you so much for reading this and for your kind words!🤍

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Peter Mladinic's avatar

What I especially like is that I’ve never read another poem quite like this one. It’s very good. I like the sounds and images, the blend of literal and figurative language.

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Suchita Senthil Kumar's avatar

This means the world to me. Thank you so much Peter : )

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Peter Mladinic's avatar

You’re very welcome, Suchita!

And thank you for subscribing to me.

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A Ikram Poetry | Healing 🍉's avatar

this is so beautifullll

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