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Really insightful and well researched. Opened my eyes thank you. Concrete poetry is a valid art form… EE Cummings was an artist after all.

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That was a fascinating journey through concrete poetry, and you’ve opened my eyes to some real beauties. I particularly like the ‘tree’ one and the ‘calendar month’ chapbook you’ve shared. Inspiring! Thank you 😊

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I'm so glad this resonated with you. Thank you so much for your kind words! 😊

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I remember when I studied poetry everyone was always hating on the shape poems. I’m glad you’re giving them love.

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I'm happy this found its way to you. I'm intrigued to know why they hated it

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Yeah I’m happy I found you, I haven’t figured out how to find anyone on here, so I’ve been writing into the void.

Haha I think they found when they related to the content of the poem, for instance a poem about a forest in the shape of tree or an autumn poem in the shape of a leaf that it was almost campy and takes away from the tone of the poem?

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Well! That was extremely interesting, Suchita. I enjoy concrete poetry too - but you have taught me so much more about it.

Concrete poetry seems rare these days, and on Substack, but I published one of my own recently. If you are interested:

https://open.substack.com/pub/davidkirkby/p/apple?r=471m47&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

You might also like my far simpler work - "Process Flow Chart" https://davidkirkby.substack.com/p/process-flow-chart?r=471m47

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Thank you David. I'm super intrigued by Process Flow Chart, such a clever idea!

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Thankyou Suchita! 3d poetry would be fun…

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Oh yes!

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Thank you so much for your kind words : )

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